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Wedding Feast by My-Magic-Dream Wedding Feast by My-Magic-Dream
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First off, this piece has a very good color harmony and very bright colors. It shows that the author clearly has a good understanding of color theory. He uses darker colors for the shades and analog colors for the lights (See the tablecloth, it's light green, shaded with darker green and highlighted with yellow).

The characters are all taking carefree attitudes. But, do they fit the picture? If you animate it, what is each pony doing?

Soarin' is jumping at the cake, hungry or perhaps just wanting some candy. Spitfire is giving him a friendly glance. Rainbow Dash seems to have noticed his intentions. Pinkie Pie is watching some candies directly in front of her, smiling.

Fluttershy has the most collected look, as she has closed her eyes and appears to be singing. Only Fluttershy can sing just before the feast. The curls of her hair are very nicely done.

Applejack, on the other hand, seems to have taken Pinkie Pie's place while she eats: she is breaking the fourth wall, looking directly at the viewer with a defiant yet friendly attitude. The just married couple are at the background, cuddling.

Rarity has no interest on the sweets, instead taking a glance at her hair, maybe checking if it still looks fabulous. The royal sisters for their part, are looking at the entire scene. However, Luna is unable to look at the table, since both Celestia and her mane are blocking her visual field.

Twilight Sparkle is the most rigid of all the ponies, since she is only looking at the front.

The setting also has a lot of detail. With a roman style, the building has several columns with all sorts of colorful motifs on them, like vines and flowers or pony silhouettes. The tiles are very shiny, since they have reflections. And at the background, you can see a lot of stars on the dusk sky.

There are, as in any artwork piece, fields of improvement. The cake and the pie on the table are assymetrical. The shadows are just pencil strokes, and really aren't in the direction of a light source. The sky could use a smoother transition or more subdued colors, since it seems there is fire on the horizon. The shapes look a bit sketchy: there are a lot of definition lines on it. (e. g. Fluttershy's eyes) The floor's perspective is off (a bit more tilted to the front than it should be).

Overall, it is a very detailed and colorful piece.
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DungeonBrony Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's nice to have the sisters looking on.
I'm sure they will eat something later, but Celestia in particular just looks happy that her friends are enjoying themselves :).

Also, the expressions on Soarin, RD, and Shining are kinda funny here :).
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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jakamakataka Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Is Soarin eyeing the cake or Dash ?
It looks like he's going for a cake while she's LOOKING at him as he was a cake.
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FyreLyghts Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I WANT TO DRAW THIS WELL SOMEDAY!!!

Great job, i am envious of you :D
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asluc96 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool! :D
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student
thanks ^^
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asluc96 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome!
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RookieOwl Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This just looks SO PRETTY :icontearplz:
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student
lol, thank you :D
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jay4president Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
pinkie's hair is sooo great
I never seen her hair like that before
you didn't only put detail into the picture but you were able to show the personalities of each ponies
thats what good MLP art is not just making cute ponies but showing how there different.
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student
thank you ^^ I'm glad you like it, and the last episode of mlp fim of season 2 she has her hair like that :3
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jay4president Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
i need to look at that episode again
ever since season 2 ended all iv been doing mlp related is looking at pictures and i brought a derpy shirt
but your welcome
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Barrel-Dragon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lies! this is nothing like a wedding feast! there isn't nearly enough boring conversation and screaming children!

seriously though, this is an awesome bit of artwork.
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
ha ha ha thank you so much for the kind comment ^^
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Barrel-Dragon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
not a problem :3
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badbabydoll Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that is amazing! O.O but you forgot spike?!?
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
he went to spike the punch! (get it!)
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badbabydoll Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD lol
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Squirrel734 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
Beautiful. :meow:
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student
Thank you so much :D
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twistedlover35 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
wow! thats 20% cooler than well....EVERYTHING!!!
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
thank you so much for that comment :D
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McStalins Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My gosh, that's epic! o_O Their manes are magnificent, I love the way you're doing them (:
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student
Aww thank you ^^
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arteverywere Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
tis is so ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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axdreamximagination Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Really reminds me of the the fleeting moment aspect of what impressionist painting had. Good Job!
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
thank you so much ^^
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QAtheAuthoress Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
But isn't it nighttime? :| The background looks like stars at night. Unless it's considered lunch for Luna. Whatever I think this is very nice.
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
thank you, and thank you again for the error in the title I fave changed it to a feast instead of lunch :3
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QAtheAuthoress Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
Glad to know. :D
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Crystic Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Soarin's face!
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student
PIE! ( dribble )
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Space-Dash Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Good job bro ^w^

i love the look of applejack, made me laught for a reason xD
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
thank you, I'm glad it made you laugh :D
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xYarks Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is very well done~! Truely well done~!
Love epsically the hair~!
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
thank you :D
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Juliapple Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Really love the colours ^^
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
thanks ^^
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Juliapple Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
You're welcome :iconeyes-plz:
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MyCreationzWebsite Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Nice Job! :)

Keep up the great work.
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
thank you very much :D
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MyCreationzWebsite Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
No problem :) If your interested I recently launched a site similar to DA but with way more options like film and music..I would love it if you created a profile and posted some of your stuff. www.MyCreationz.com let me know if you have any questions
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