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June 16, 2012
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Adoption by My-Magic-Dream Adoption by My-Magic-Dream
This is my first pony picture on manga studio :) this is dedicated to my buddy Bradley because I know how much he loves fluttershy (even though I ADORE her :D)

Characters (C) :iconfyre-flye: / Hasbro
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Critique by LeoTheKitten Jun 16, 2012, 10:17:44 AM
This is what I call ART, I can't keep my eyes of off it. It just makes me feel like I'm in another world, "Please Love Me" is magic, Fluttershy is a beautiful pony, and they way I see it you make her BETTER. I still can't keep my eyes of it! I could stare at this ALL DAY! I don't know how to to explain this. They eyes, the hair, the yellow, the shadows, the stars, is just............. Perfect.
I hope you keep up this kind of work, You are a TRUE artiest. And yes, I will Love you.
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Before I begin, I must say that this artwork has much more of a profound effect on me considering that I have a tiny seven week old kitten lounging on my lap at the moment, who is up for adoption as it were.

Anywho, on with the critique!

This is a very nice work overall. The smile on Fluttershy's face is adorable, almost like she's looking slightly up at a prospective adopter to love her. Really adds to the diabeetus of the photo overall.

I think you could have manages to work on her hair a little more. The detail you've put into it is nice, but it seems too angled to look very realistic, particularly around where there are supposed to be curves; I see a few inaccuracies in angle measures between outer hair curve and inner hair curve.

I love the way you made her wing; it looks very realistic, and very detailed [which is my weak point, if you read some of my other critiques ;)]

Now this is just personal preference, but I love how you've made her eyelashes go in front of her hair. I saw an artwork the other day that had an eyelash in front of the hair, and I liked that part, but they also had a black eye outline in front of the hair, too. That's what I didn't really like about it. So just watch out for inaccuracies like that, even if you haven't done it here.

The shadowing on Fluttershy is nice around the hair and wings, but it seems a bit off around the bottom-right portion of her face. It's almost like there are two spotlights on her at separate angles, when most of the drawing's lights only point to one.

As for the background, the stars are an excellent touch. They really bring Fluttershy into the foreground well. If you can, though, I would change the color to something a little more inviting; not necessarily something that draws attention to the stars themselves, but something that conveys a lighter mood than black does. Maybe a soft turquoise or lavender-esque color.

Besides that, and a few other minor inconsistencies that I don't even really notice unless I look at full-res [also considering that I don't really believe there are any real mistakes in art], you've done an excellent job with this. You have very strong potential to create more fantastic artworks like this, my friend. Keep at it!

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TrentSchmidt Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
Who wouldn't love you fluttershy, it's almost impossible not to, unless you hate adorableness.
XxTheHippiexX Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
OMG you did that on The Computer!?!?!?!?!?!?
Toodleticklespony Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whats that link for?
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student
yes I did indeed :meow:
Blockblast Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Just to reference one of my favorite nonpony videos...
Technical0Difficulty Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is going to be my phone's new wallpaper.
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student
ooh! thank you, Im honored
Technical0Difficulty Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure @ w@ It's so adorable
sdyoshi123 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Yes Fluttershy:heart: , yes! I will love you:heart:, forever and ever until I die :heart: Nothing will ever keep me from loving you! :heart:
FanFicFrenzied Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
I love you! :3
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