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This is my first pony picture on manga studio :) this is dedicated to my buddy Bradley because I know how much he loves fluttershy (even though I ADORE her :D)

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Critique by LeoTheKitten Jun 16, 2012, 10:17:44 AM
This is what I call ART, I can't keep my eyes of off it. It just makes me feel like I'm in another world, "Please Love Me" is magic, Fluttershy is a beautiful pony, and they way I see it you make her BETTER. I still can't keep my eyes of it! I could stare at this ALL DAY! I don't know how to to explain this. They eyes, the hair, the yellow, the shadows, the stars, is just............. Perfect.
I hope you keep up this kind of work, You are a TRUE artiest. And yes, I will Love you.
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Before I begin, I must say that this artwork has much more of a profound effect on me considering that I have a tiny seven week old kitten lounging on my lap at the moment, who is up for adoption as it were.

Anywho, on with the critique!

This is a very nice work overall. The smile on Fluttershy's face is adorable, almost like she's looking slightly up at a prospective adopter to love her. Really adds to the diabeetus of the photo overall.

I think you could have manages to work on her hair a little more. The detail you've put into it is nice, but it seems too angled to look very realistic, particularly around where there are supposed to be curves; I see a few inaccuracies in angle measures between outer hair curve and inner hair curve.

I love the way you made her wing; it looks very realistic, and very detailed [which is my weak point, if you read some of my other critiques ;)]

Now this is just personal preference, but I love how you've made her eyelashes go in front of her hair. I saw an artwork the other day that had an eyelash in front of the hair, and I liked that part, but they also had a black eye outline in front of the hair, too. That's what I didn't really like about it. So just watch out for inaccuracies like that, even if you haven't done it here.

The shadowing on Fluttershy is nice around the hair and wings, but it seems a bit off around the bottom-right portion of her face. It's almost like there are two spotlights on her at separate angles, when most of the drawing's lights only point to one.

As for the background, the stars are an excellent touch. They really bring Fluttershy into the foreground well. If you can, though, I would change the color to something a little more inviting; not necessarily something that draws attention to the stars themselves, but something that conveys a lighter mood than black does. Maybe a soft turquoise or lavender-esque color.

Besides that, and a few other minor inconsistencies that I don't even really notice unless I look at full-res [also considering that I don't really believe there are any real mistakes in art], you've done an excellent job with this. You have very strong potential to create more fantastic artworks like this, my friend. Keep at it!

~gifs
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:icontrentschmidt:
TrentSchmidt Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
Who wouldn't love you fluttershy, it's almost impossible not to, unless you hate adorableness.
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XxTheHippiexX Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
OMG you did that on The Computer!?!?!?!?!?!?
[link]
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Toodleticklespony Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whats that link for?
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student
yes I did indeed :meow:
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:iconblockblast:
Blockblast Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Just to reference one of my favorite nonpony videos...
"OH NO!!I'M ALLERGIC TO ADORABLENESS!"
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:icontechnical0difficulty:
Technical0Difficulty Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is going to be my phone's new wallpaper.
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student
ooh! thank you, Im honored
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:icontechnical0difficulty:
Technical0Difficulty Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure @ w@ It's so adorable
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sdyoshi123 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Yes Fluttershy:heart: , yes! I will love you:heart:, forever and ever until I die :heart: Nothing will ever keep me from loving you! :heart:
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FanFicFrenzied Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
I love you! :3
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:iconxyarks:
xYarks Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
How do you do this actually?....
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student
what do you mean?
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:iconxyarks:
xYarks Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The effects are magnificent~!
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student
ooh effects thank you :meow: I used manga studio that's how I got those effects :P
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:iconxyarks:
xYarks Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Turns out very very good~!
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student
thanks ^_^
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:iconcakeblitz:
cakeblitz Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
:icondaawplz:
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Navy-x Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
done i love you and i will take you home and love you forever
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:iconpatroison:
PatRoison Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So much D'AWW! Can't help but love that pony. :iconloveloveplz:
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snakebloodprince Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i really like this one and the critique has some good points to.
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:iconneutralbrony:
Neutralbrony Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconyesyoucanplz: You'll always be my favortie pony
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TheAljavis Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU FOREVER, FLUTTERSHY!!!!!
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Blackegg13 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
:iconyesyoucanplz::iconpuke-rainbowplz::iconsjhmplz:
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BAMART19 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
I think Fluttershy got so much love it'll spill over all of Equestria.
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EternalSword7 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This has got to be one of the cutest Fluttershy drawings I've seen. Love it! :D
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sqarishoctagon Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
How can we not?
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:iconzaiali:
zaiali Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Who doesn't love her?

Anyway Nice work!
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rozasupreme Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
hnnnnng.... too...much...cute...words...won't...work.... <3
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:iconraborn:
Raborn Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Too late.
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:iconvicmanone:
VicmanOne Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
My my my , I just hugged the screen squeeing.
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:iconthe-syreth-clan:
The-Syreth-Clan Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, I'd so hug FluShy-MuShy right now. :heart:
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Botboy41 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Where Do I Sign the Adoption Forms?
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nenogirlygirl Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG WOW LOL i love flutter shy to SHES SO DARN ADORABLE!!! l ithink ur really getting the hang of ditital art!!!!
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My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student
aww thank you that means a lot to me ^^
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:iconnenogirlygirl:
nenogirlygirl Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
uvw!!! :tighthug:
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Pandacuteness2 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG That is so damn cuter why are people so good at drawing wow why is everyone so good at drawing these days its not fair
Her hair and eyes look so realistic they are amazing I can't keep my eyes off them OUO
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WarlockTheGreat Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
You don't have to ask for my love!
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YoutubepoopPinkFloyd Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee: I'll love you!
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:iconchaoschao100:
chaoschao100 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I wuv u!
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:iconstereopony454:
StereoPony454 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Sure thing Ms. Shy
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:iconmsmiliw:
MsMiliw Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I DO LOVE YOU FLUTTERSHY!!!! :D
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SkyFoxy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwww ^^
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:iconyayayayayala:
yayayayayala Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
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CJFinnegan Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Always.
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DreamingFool12 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the detail in her hair and wings, you should do Rarity next :D Of course I say this and Fluttershy is my all time fav lol But that hair is fantastic. You could draw Rarity with ease!
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student
ok I will do Rarity :D I do love drawing her hair ^^
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DreamingFool12 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Smashing! :D I can't wait to see it!
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RiddlerSphinx Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww... thats so CUTE! :D
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Mariex911x Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg that is so awesome~!
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:iconmy-magic-dream:
My-Magic-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student
aww thank you ;p
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